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高考英语的独立写作技巧

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中间段的写作其实非常简单,只需要把提纲中的信息按照顺序写成语句就行了,只是中国考生要学会逻辑连接、句式连接并避免抽象地空谈。 比如: A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory nea

  中间段的写作其实非常简单,只需要把提纲中的信息按照顺序写成语句就行了,只是中国考生要学会逻辑连接、句式连接并避免抽象地空谈。

  比如:

  A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

  假设考生写的第一层是建工厂的好处,第二层是建工厂的坏处(注意这是一道比较/反差类题目)。现在我们写第二层:建工厂对社区不好,而想写的是环境方面的内容,提纲可以是:

  Harmful: [pollution], not worth it

  ——Air: acid rain, ozone depletion ,greenhouse

  ——Water: drinking water

  ——Trees: floods and droughts

  这个段落可以这样写:

  Building large factories would be harmful to the community because it will induce environmental pollution. Factories, especially those emoloying toxic chemicals, will definitely destroy the quality of air and water in town. They generate smog and other atmospheric emissions which contribute to the greenhouse effect, ozone depletion and acid rain; they dump industrial waste into rivers which are supposed to be drinking water supply; they accelerate the deforestation which is proven to be responsible for abnormal floods and regional drought. And people's health is at stake. Having a few factories is not worth that risk.

  再比如:

  It is generally agreed that society benefits from the work of its members. Compare the contributions of artists to society with the contributions of scientists to society. Which type of contribution do you think is valued more by your society? Give specific reasons to support your answer.

  假设考生写的第一层是关于艺术家对社会的贡献,第二层写科学家对社会的贡献,而想写的内容是环境方面的,提纲可以写成:

  · Scientists: more obvious

  ——Advancement: Plane, computer, vacuum cleaner

  ——Make our lives easier, more secure

  ——Help arts: CD, TV, movie, mp3

  这个段落可以这样写:

  The contributions scientists make to society are more obvious than those made by artists. Almost all the critical advancements that make our lives easier, such as the plane we take to travel abroad, the computers we use (whether for work or for entertainments), and the home appliances which help us cook our meals and clean our houses, come from the creative ideas and hard work of scientists. Those scientific discoveries and innovations make out work more efficient, our shopping more convenient, and our lives more secure. Plus, to some extent scientists even contribute a lot to the arts——without technological progress, there wouldn’t have been movie centers, television, and mp3 players which infuse art into

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